"The sun rose/ and caught it's fall"-- strong contrasting images between "rose" and "fall". Dawn-- a moment of clarity or an enlightened moment. What speaks the loudest in the koan is that the "soft note" is "unheard" and the lasting ripples of the koan are that "the ripple" is "soon erased". The "grace of nature"-- what smoothes everything over in nature or makes it always work out is that it's "liquid". I also enjoyed the cylcic quality as well-- a very fluid poem. Liquidity indeed.
I do so love reading your work, Robin. You never cease to disappoint me. This piece is soft and flowy, very lucid. I love your imagery of the dew falling. Beautiful writing.
You and your beautiful soul for the infinitesimal things of nature>> I want to kiss that beak of yours for creating such a pristine, tranquil, and yet, melancholy picture. My spirit is swimming in the dewy image>>
I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express .
Feel my words , look as deeply into yo.. more..