Liquidity

Liquidity

A Chapter by Robin
"

california koans

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the sun rose

 

and caught its fall

 

a dewdrop slipping

 

into the glossy stream

 

its soft note unheard

 

its ripple soon erased

 

the grace of nature

 

liquid ~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



© 2011 Robin


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"The sun rose/ and caught it's fall"-- strong contrasting images between "rose" and "fall". Dawn-- a moment of clarity or an enlightened moment. What speaks the loudest in the koan is that the "soft note" is "unheard" and the lasting ripples of the koan are that "the ripple" is "soon erased". The "grace of nature"-- what smoothes everything over in nature or makes it always work out is that it's "liquid". I also enjoyed the cylcic quality as well-- a very fluid poem. Liquidity indeed.

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beautiful and delicate! wonderful images. you're a natural at nature reflections.

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Mmm....this is magical. Love the flow and imagery.

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Gorgeous! Love the imagery, and the subtle power implied here so gently. Wonderful wordcrafting, keep 'em coming, Robin!

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like a dew drop easily settles into readers' mind.

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fresh falls of winters melt

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I do so love reading your work, Robin. You never cease to disappoint me. This piece is soft and flowy, very lucid. I love your imagery of the dew falling. Beautiful writing.

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Beautiful, peaceful - could so easily fall asleep to its music

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The nature of water is pure life

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this poem flows like liquid

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You and your beautiful soul for the infinitesimal things of nature>> I want to kiss that beak of yours for creating such a pristine, tranquil, and yet, melancholy picture. My spirit is swimming in the dewy image>>

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