Symphony

 

 

deep purple sunrise 

 

birds praise golden beams of joy

 

the muse sings softly

Reviews

[Narnie]

Y'see, I can appreciate this one too because the title adds to the poem like an introduction. I find haikus hard - I really do. And I'm not being flippant in that... I think it is my mind that enquires and demands greater explanation. I'm a talker not a thinker - or rather I think as I talk and ... I talk a lot. I need rewiring, I know. BUT I do appreciate the beauty and the ethos of the form and I love that other people love it so. I suppose I just feel so utterly inadequate that most go completely through me. (Oh and you can delete this comment if you like, haha... but I really wanted to explain. One of my friends hates my long poems, likes my short ones. Another likes my long ones and thinks I'm being lazy with the short ones. I think perhaps we all need someone who is going to remain cold about something or other of what we do, as long as they are honest with it and love something about us then maybe that's not too bad?) Damn, this review is officially way too long. Delete it? hahahaha...

[Seshat Nidaba]

Delightful, a many hued weaving of velvet etched words and whispering embroidery.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

oh this is like swimming in satin...the Master crowns his creation in the hue of royalty...the birds- trumpeters at court - His female side gives it expression.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful! Colors and singing birds.. and a singing muse .. not much more to ask for.
Love this one best-

Chloe

[Lachenille Papillion]

very pretty poetic, made me smile~

[Lilly Negoi]

this is indeed a beautiful one, with a great sonority!