Turn

Turn

A Chapter by Robin
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perspective

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loneliness

 

becomes with a smile

 

solitude

 

 



© 2011 Robin


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Oh I love how this becomes like looking at a side of a rectangle...depending which view, the perspective changes. this has multiple sides which mainly inspires, though the first word when I first read it has that sad connotation...This is very cleverly done..

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..I have looked at these five words ... for some reason they make me feel desolation.. Very many emotions within the five words.
Reading again I see solitude as not that bad .

Chloe





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Love it. know the difference but you made it feel evermore..

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beautifully emphasized difference :)

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haha - brilliant. one of the best things i've read. ingenious
and the title too

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