Turn

perspective

 

 

loneliness

 

becomes with a smile

 

solitude

 

 

Author's Note

3-5-3

Reviews

[Ladysue]

Oh I love how this becomes like looking at a side of a rectangle...depending which view, the perspective changes. this has multiple sides which mainly inspires, though the first word when I first read it has that sad connotation...This is very cleverly done..

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Now that is Beautiful.

[arbitrary jane]

such a difference.
lovely. the form fits perfectly. like sliding into a well-made dress. ... i suppose trousers would work too, as a metaphor... unless you are partial to dresses. :)

[Narnie]

I like this one a lot. Definitely my fave because it encapsulates the thought without leaving any questions.

[OT]

see I think I'd like a bit of grammar ;) ;) hahaha

I quite like this idea - from lonliness to solitude - I always need some solitude once in a while to top me going insane - but it is chosen... loneliness is more inflicted! very interesting take!

[Bare Bohemian]

not lonely
in my aloneness
so I smile

let's just say
this hermit relates
to this piece ;)

[roarke]

Excellent.
Nirvana is reached
Joy is born

[Ed Hart]

a huge amen

[Jasmine]

amazing,
i think to myself -
your poem!

[paul]

oh, also inspirational