Smiles, laughter, love... all the best things in Life seem to multiply when we give them away. "simple heart-felt words"... so often we seem unable to find words to express what we are feeling. They seem too simple, too inadequate to the task at hand. In fact, sometimes a smile really does say all that we are feeling in the best way possible. Direct, honest and simple piece, it expresses a great deal of Truth. Well done!
Smiles, laughter, love... all the best things in Life seem to multiply when we give them away. "simple heart-felt words"... so often we seem unable to find words to express what we are feeling. They seem too simple, too inadequate to the task at hand. In fact, sometimes a smile really does say all that we are feeling in the best way possible. Direct, honest and simple piece, it expresses a great deal of Truth. Well done!
brevity is the aim today? ha I've seen a load of tankas and senryus - and as always yours does not disappoint - your poem mirrors my thoughts - simple heart felt words bring smiles!! :)
I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express .
Feel my words , look as deeply into yo.. more..