Felt

Felt

A Chapter by Robin
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simple heart felt words

 

felt within adoring hearts

 

a smile brings sunshine



© 2011 Robin


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Smiles, laughter, love... all the best things in Life seem to multiply when we give them away. "simple heart-felt words"... so often we seem unable to find words to express what we are feeling. They seem too simple, too inadequate to the task at hand. In fact, sometimes a smile really does say all that we are feeling in the best way possible. Direct, honest and simple piece, it expresses a great deal of Truth. Well done!

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a damn fine poem
that I will keep in my heart
in case I get cold



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Ha! I couldn't help but think of those adorable Valentines Cards with the big red felt hearts. Brought Valentine's sunshine into my window.

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this ray of light warms my heart...

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Now...that's love! Spare, meaningful, and packed with emotion.

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sunshine and light and love, they are all one :)

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shimmers,this is bedazzling.

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I love simple words that are heartfelt. So true how a smile brings sunshine.
Three lines twelve words packed with much meaning.

Chloe

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the most precious things in life are free...

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I like the recurring words, feels like the ideas are circling above my head. Lovely.

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I love last line is wonderful. Sunshine always makes me in a better mood and makes me smile.

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