Felt
A Chapter by
Robin
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simple heart felt words
felt within adoring hearts
a smile brings sunshine
© 2011 Robin
Featured Review
Smiles, laughter, love... all the best things in Life seem to multiply when we give them away. "simple heart-felt words"... so often we seem unable to find words to express what we are feeling. They seem too simple, too inadequate to the task at hand. In fact, sometimes a smile really does say all that we are feeling in the best way possible. Direct, honest and simple piece, it expresses a great deal of Truth. Well done!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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a damn fine poem
that I will keep in my heart
in case I get cold
Posted 13 Years Ago
a damn fine poem
that I will keep in my heart
in case I get cold
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Ha! I couldn't help but think of those adorable Valentines Cards with the big red felt hearts. Brought Valentine's sunshine into my window.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Ha! I couldn't help but think of those adorable Valentines Cards with the big red felt hearts. Brought Valentine's sunshine into my window.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
this ray of light warms my heart...
Posted 13 Years Ago
this ray of light warms my heart...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Now...that's love! Spare, meaningful, and packed with emotion.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Now...that's love! Spare, meaningful, and packed with emotion.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
sunshine and light and love, they are all one :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
sunshine and light and love, they are all one :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
shimmers,this is bedazzling.
Posted 13 Years Ago
shimmers,this is bedazzling.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love simple words that are heartfelt. So true how a smile brings sunshine.
Three lines twelve words packed with much meaning.
Chloe
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love simple words that are heartfelt. So true how a smile brings sunshine.
Three lines twelve words packed with much meaning.
Chloe
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
the most precious things in life are free...
Posted 13 Years Ago
the most precious things in life are free...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like the recurring words, feels like the ideas are circling above my head. Lovely.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I like the recurring words, feels like the ideas are circling above my head. Lovely.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love last line is wonderful. Sunshine always makes me in a better mood and makes me smile.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love last line is wonderful. Sunshine always makes me in a better mood and makes me smile.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 14, 2011
Last Updated on February 15, 2011
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Robin CA
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I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express .
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