Felt

Felt

A Chapter by Robin
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simple heart felt words

 

felt within adoring hearts

 

a smile brings sunshine



© 2011 Robin


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Smiles, laughter, love... all the best things in Life seem to multiply when we give them away. "simple heart-felt words"... so often we seem unable to find words to express what we are feeling. They seem too simple, too inadequate to the task at hand. In fact, sometimes a smile really does say all that we are feeling in the best way possible. Direct, honest and simple piece, it expresses a great deal of Truth. Well done!

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love the first line...a beautiful sentiment...great piece...

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all seen in the mind - aligned in hearts....

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And the heart is again whole, shadowed soul brings forth the light in a piece as good as this :)
Hugs xx

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Very simple, sweet and fitting given the day you posted =)

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simply felt, my friend,

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Short but sweet =) love it

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A powerful and beautiful poem in 12 words. That takes great talent. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

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It's like a pretty flower.

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... all over the world.

pass it on Robin... pass it on.

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the repetition in this is so effective, like a touchstone you come back to

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