Felt
A Chapter by
Robin
~*~
simple heart felt words
felt within adoring hearts
a smile brings sunshine
© 2011 Robin
Featured Review
Smiles, laughter, love... all the best things in Life seem to multiply when we give them away. "simple heart-felt words"... so often we seem unable to find words to express what we are feeling. They seem too simple, too inadequate to the task at hand. In fact, sometimes a smile really does say all that we are feeling in the best way possible. Direct, honest and simple piece, it expresses a great deal of Truth. Well done!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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love the first line...a beautiful sentiment...great piece...
Posted 13 Years Ago
love the first line...a beautiful sentiment...great piece...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
all seen in the mind - aligned in hearts....
Posted 13 Years Ago
all seen in the mind - aligned in hearts....
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
And the heart is again whole, shadowed soul brings forth the light in a piece as good as this :)
Hugs xx
Posted 13 Years Ago
And the heart is again whole, shadowed soul brings forth the light in a piece as good as this :)
Hugs xx
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very simple, sweet and fitting given the day you posted =)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very simple, sweet and fitting given the day you posted =)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
simply felt, my friend,
Posted 13 Years Ago
simply felt, my friend,
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Short but sweet =) love it
Posted 13 Years Ago
Short but sweet =) love it
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A powerful and beautiful poem in 12 words. That takes great talent. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
A powerful and beautiful poem in 12 words. That takes great talent. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
It's like a pretty flower.
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's like a pretty flower.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
... all over the world.
pass it on Robin... pass it on.
Posted 13 Years Ago
... all over the world.
pass it on Robin... pass it on.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
the repetition in this is so effective, like a touchstone you come back to
Posted 13 Years Ago
the repetition in this is so effective, like a touchstone you come back to
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 14, 2011
Last Updated on February 15, 2011
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Robin CA
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I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express .
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