Magique

to feel

 

 

c'est magique!

 

pas de fumée

pas de miroirs

seulement ce que je ressens

quand je te vois ...

Author's Note

it is magic
no smoke
no mirrors
only how I feel
when I see you

Reviews

[Emily Quinn]

ahh the beauty of the french language, how I love it. This is a great one Robin, very fluent and such a wonderful comparison for "those feelings" like magic. I like the french version best- which makes sense being that it's the poems original language lol
I guess there's only one more thing to say; Comme le titre, vos mots ont une magie de leur propre!

[Emily B]

we think through a language, and this is a big thought

[Ed Hart]

thems the big guns

[Ruth]

Lovely!
Simply said and yet each line comforts the next, literally comforts!
Awesome!
xx

[sarah]

can't read spanish

[Marie Harrison]

Lovely! Very mysterious.

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sigh..Robin..I magical moment you have created, a skill where a few words speaks volumes, this being said, yours is a masterclass..

[Norma M Sutton]

I hope the note is the interpretation lol The poem looks to be French? Maybe? Of which all I know is hello and goodbye. Nicely said.

[Dinesh Sairam]

senorita

vous dans le miroir

temps de gel

un peu de lumière derrière

brille, brille ..

[Michael of Gilead]

Ho, ho, ho
It's magic you know
Never believe, it's not so
It's magic, you know
Never believe, it's not so

[JelliFyshKissUs]

I love this so much, but hate it out of jealousy; for I am not bilingual, but I could probably fake my way through a few countries...
This is as touching as it is simplistic. Beautiful.