Magique

to feel

 

 

c'est magique!

 

pas de fumée

pas de miroirs

seulement ce que je ressens

quand je te vois ...

Author's Note

it is magic
no smoke
no mirrors
only how I feel
when I see you

Reviews

[Emily Quinn]

ahh the beauty of the french language, how I love it. This is a great one Robin, very fluent and such a wonderful comparison for "those feelings" like magic. I like the french version best- which makes sense being that it's the poems original language lol
I guess there's only one more thing to say; Comme le titre, vos mots ont une magie de leur propre!

[Liza]

sounds beautiful
i took 2 years of french in college
this sounds beautiful

[Poeticpiers]

toujours l'amour

[Marianne]

Magical portrayal of TRUE LOVE.....a silent sound of dedicated, unselfish love.

Magical touch of universal TRUTH when the mind is connected to the heart without strings attached !!

[luciddreamer]

This made me smile :)
Peace
Robin

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the translation. This is a simple and beautiful piece that hides nothing behind imagery.

[Lauren Beth]

Your words are so sincere and just absolutely beautiful...a moving piece. I truly do love the lines 'no smoke, no mirrors"...no tricks or deception, just pure untainted feelings. You really do say so very much in just five short lines, it is amazing.

[The Morbid The Merrier]

Very deep, very beautiful. I cannot explain my exact reaction to it, besides me just telling you over and over again that it's amazing, and that you really hit the nail on the head.

You've described love so beautifully, making it so ethereal, that it took my breath away on the last line. Simplistic, but depth. Quality, not quantity. Congrats.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Devoid of illusion...short, sweet, and to the point yet deep...the best kind of message there is :)

[TAO]

I was just going to say, "French? I don't know French!!!!" Thanks for the translation. I know this feeling. It's almost a stranger, now. I get this, though.

[Deanna]

simple;
the best kind of poem