Rosa

 

middle aged woman

tired of giving up her seat

in humanity

Reviews

[Khitii Lae-Ahn]

lol...sweetie...makes me wanna give you a HUGE HUG...haven't quite hit middle age...and already i feel this ENTIRELY!...Very nicely done!

is this a haiku? i think i counted the syllables correctly. (5.7.5) Dense words Robin. It is true. :) great work!

[marcie]

And tomorrow is just another day .... Nicely done

[Liza]

nice senryu

[Brad]

despite the volume of this write...the weight is definitely heavy

[Charles]

Yesterday is but a blink of the eye. I can appreciate her journey and your retelling. Nicely done.

[Dream Weaver]

I gave mine up just yesterday..
all kidding a side nicely done
my brother.....

[Aven]

I really apreciate when people can express themselves in few words. :)

[My Fair Lady]

How I love it when a woman has had e-nough! Well done Robin.

[No use.]

a senryu =^.^= . 3 lines that stretch throughout humanity. love how i pictured a worn middle-aged woman on a bus/subway, but then the last line just whisked me away across the sea ...into everything and nothing