Fat Man

object at rest ...

 

 

Fat Man with remote

sits comfy in his hollow

couch sighs not again

 

Author's Note

Senryu , a form similiar to Haiku , a satirical look at human nature

Reviews

[Narnie]

I was married to a man who spent ages looking for batteries for the remote whilst bemoaning the fact he was missing his programme. I didn't bother to wonder why he didn't just get up and turn it over by the button. I just carried on watching whatever I was watching. :) In our house we call the remote the 'wand.' This should have a pic of Homer with it, Robin. My review is officially longer than your poem. Hehe, I am USELESS at reviewing haikus and senryus.

[Michael of Gilead]

Hey! Is it wrong to love your remote?

[Athena Ramos]

i've been trying to make a haiku or a senryu but the words wouldn't fit :(
and this senryu reminds me of my cousin :P
"not again~" :3

[No use.]

hahaha~ i think everyone can relate, i wonder how many times i have said those words "not again" in my lifetime and how many times I will continue to say it in the future. hard habit to break huh.. lol

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

lol i know this man... a comical look at the life of some..

Chloe

[roarke]

not like the former grunting lifestyle of three channels and no remote eh? another precise picture.

[Lilly Negoi]

lollll, right, "not again" :))

[Poetic Beauty]

This is funny from the couches perspective.

[miSS LEaf]

really sharp :)

[heich]

guilty me..lol