Angel's view

short and to the point

 

human mind seeks
patterns of desire and form
missing the magic

 

 

Author's Note

what do you see ?

Reviews

[Emily]

We seek conformity in our worlds and walk so easily past what we're really meant to see -- the beauty and the magic of the world. We miss the way flowers grow from between concrete slabs, or the way that the rails of a house rust down the brick and vines cover the deteroriation.

Well said! Seek the magic.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

we search for happiness without realizing it is there sitting within us. we strive to gain this and that...while to be content all we need to do is look around at the earth...find the arms of people we love...by seeking- we make it harder for ourselves to find sometimes-

[Narnie]

a mirror? Is that wrong? I believe patterns of desire and magic are all inside of us. But then I'm weird like that.

[No use.]

ah , that is the worst~ i hate when that happens

[FireWoman]

A cosmic want ad, straight & to the point.

[roarke]

Brings to mind a favorite quote
"It's not what you like that makes you fat, it's what you get."

I see white rabbits and top hats everywhere....

[OT]

I see a subtle manipulation of the form?? one less syllable in first line to mirror the idea of us seeking patterns and "form" but missing the magic of the words? do I win? haha!

[Lilly Negoi]

do i have to see something? :)

[Jasmine]

the imagination is lost to the "normality" of the surrounding world. We get up, we go to work, we come home, we sleep, and the cycle continues, leaving little room for magic. Maybe we can create more, after reading poems such as yours.

[Dani]

"and in between the moon and you, angels get a better view of the crumbling difference between wrong and right." -counting crows.

good write.

[emmajoy]

what do I see .. a mind missing a certain kind of stimulation, a spirit needing more ..