Plateaus

Haiku

        the mesa awaits

 

for each one a course of will

 

   by drought or thunder

Reviews

[No use.]

sometimes that's the only way~ through extreme measures

[roarke]

excellent.
nothing more can be said.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

You pack much into such a teensy package...patience is indeed a great virtue...

[Lilly Negoi]

very nice! and very encompassing!

[emmajoy]

great haiku this .. far better than most
meaning, personal: whatever and wherever in life, choice to determine.

drinking up the rain
and cracking in dry weather
mesa still stands tall

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

A course of will indeed determines the path we take.I agree with Jennie..these are seemingly simple words with deeper meaning.I like how you have kept the thread open to your readers for what they take from this haiku.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Reads like the mesa is a interesting place or metaphoric language for interesting place in one's life...Sara

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

there is a surface simplicity here that is just as pleasing as the deeper meaning you could take from it. that you give the reader the choice as to which they want to leave with is magic..

[Ed Hart]

and a lesson from the spirit that will leave you changed