Mariposa de sombra
A Poem by Robin
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Mariposa de sombra ~
sentir el baile
la luz de felpa
entre las cintas de sus brazos
mente arrojados
a la liberación
del amor
copyright 2013 Robin Amaral
© 2013 Robin
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i'm not a native spanish speaker...something about dancing to the beat of the lights, in your arms i'm determined to set our love free...i know i'm probably so off, but there's actually vivid imagery here. the title is lovely. this is the first time i've seen a spanish poem here. it's great you don't put a translation to it, it leaves for greater interpretation. inspires me to post one of my spanish poems. excellent job.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I like your interpetation , thank you
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11 Years Ago
You always see with a poetic eye my friend , good to see you again
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11 Years Ago
thank you Kenneth , you feel the elements of this poem - catharthis , freedom , love
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11 Years Ago
Not a problem, Robin.
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11 Years Ago
I like your interpetation , thank you
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11 Years Ago
Bailar amigo
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Added on April 9, 2013
Last Updated on April 9, 2013
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I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express .
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