Astrology

Neruda and black leather 

an Orchid in your palm 

blood orange exotica 

cheveux noirs  

an enlightened smile

pantheresque purr 

deep and  throaty - french  

I caught you , or maybe you caught me - the art of seduction

we talked of Jesus and Jung 

as the Sun bled into the night  

scorpio taurus 

she said 

"it doesn't get any better than this "

her quiver 

of roses and obsidian 

those oracle eyes cutting the summer night

spilling mystic ink through my heart 

she smiled as she kissed me 

"it is written "

copyright 2013 Robin Christopher Amaral 

Reviews

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...so we see here, in a poem such as Amarals' "Astrology", the incontrovertible aptitude inwhich the author employs, in no meek manner, the emblazened lure of Venus to call siren song to his readers, and..." oh forget it!
it's damn good, and that's that!

[Robin]

Straight to the heart - many thank you muchly's

[emmajoy]

Amazing what happens when the signs are fidgeted into juxtaposition, 'we' even achieve the tongue of tongues. Wonderful writing, poet, alluring as you were allured.. or perhaps - are! By the way, loving Neruda and having a thing about black leather .. this write has a special something for me that is nothing to do with poetry!

'.. those oracle eyes cutting the summer night ~ spilling mystic ink through my heart ~ she smiled as she kissed me ~ it is written "

[Robin]

I always likeg how juxtapose and just suppose fit together , Thank you Emma

[Circe]

gosh, tastes like an unearthly beauty.. so passionate and alive.. the stars.. they know all.. I can guess which is scorpio, which is taurus :) and.. pantheresque purr!! mmmm, that's to die for..... deeply sensual and electric.. love it!

[Robin]

I bask in yet another smile , thank you

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is mystically romantic...

from Jesus to Jung...uh huh! that keeps the circle of conversation going...deep into the night...with real meaning.

this is really good.

jacob

[Robin]

Thank you Jacob

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that's some pair of socks you have there! :-)

[Robin]

Smiling

[writing mojo]

astrological points of view....cosmic sex dance in stars setting constrains letting loose...nurturing the saturation of no longer one but two...great piece

[Robin]

such is the heartbeat of freedom , thank you

[Corset]

It is written in the stars. Actually I think they get along better with like water signs but anything can be over come if the conversation (ahem) is interesting enough :)

[Robin]

sometimes the stars must bow before love ~ merci

[Corset]

Avec plaisir!

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

This is one of my favorite pieces I have read of you. Especially i'd say the start and the end.

[Robin]

Appreciated , thank you

[luciddreamer]

Oh this reminds me of another life....long ago...enjoyed it tremendously :)

[Robin]

merci Dreamer

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Robin this is beautiful and fascinating, how they could talk about completely different things and be comfortable with each other........lovely

[Robin]

the secret is finding the connection , thank you Neva