Wild Girls

more metaphoria

"Quotation marks not needed" 

carnivale  carnal apples 

attract and distract  

tilt a whirlgirl in pearlescent swirls 

star spangled eyes to purple haze skies

of blue dream lying to the self made jam man  

bow , take another , smile if you have one 

real trill jacko  jilly swill the happy pill 

spot light cheer 

on cue ball to the side street beat of metal hook dragline fakirs

dump the trash talk sidewalk triomphe de arc  chalk up 

penance counting beads rug burn knee drop swap for the hip hop bus stop  

sticky seats and wolf whistle clean-up  

fondle the token bokon , chicken bone spoken 

nihongo  kanji , giesha  gooney tunes  lingham style  

rant pant  misdirectives

squirming sermonettes oak pew backdoor odor  

slip slide remote control loose change the channel scatter 

get a grip couch plastic or leather sin theism black lashes - fifty  

hot lime plasmonics  electronica 

devo revo shun the Sun hotseat panic  

more mores morality under the door sanity 

needily greedily fatcat chow

D cup notes bold shiny tip the waitress gold

pick one - pick two - you lose 

wonder blunder quest shun the expert 0 pinion shift 

shovel the interject , dissect the sect  

of proof spoof spooky reaction truth 

stop 

surge the urgent purge

honey money honey 

slambam trainwrecks , slo mo  shudder 

damn the people pick a side 

tequila wodka drunkcalls , s.o.b. stories and amen-nesia 

all hail !

wild girls  

copyright 2012 Robin Amaral 

Reviews

For me it was no Mary Poppins, not either: "Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious" but more a musical of: "Moulin Rouge" and all the hidden wildness under the dancing skirts....only the "fakirs' make it middle-asian-eastern, and bring me a fata-morgana effect, in a harem of love.... it all could be~
As our/and mostly your brain brings travles... :D

E.L.

[Lilly Negoi]

:)) and you talk about me...hey, i'm waiting for the music for this one, ok?

[Robin]

You want to recite this one ? :))

[Lilly Negoi]

i'll have to work on it for a while to obtain the perfect pitch tone for each line :D but i think i'll do it

[Robin]

my imagination is running wild - again

[.]

this reads like a potent strong-dose stream of consciousness, the likes of which leaves me feeling resemblences of being s****y face drunk and fashionably raw around my groin area (did i just say that outloud?..)

infectious sex. scraps of edgy-ness. wild girls...
if only they had a myth to chase down, a heroine to embody, an archetype to animate.

[Robin]

200 proof ink straight from the Mind and Soul. Campbell also said writers are to create the new Mythos of society - the myth an illusion of disillusion that leads to personal truth , the Heroine - their self - the Archetype - I can see a few , perhaps the Stars they see within their own eyes .

[Siddhartha]

A wild wild ride Robin. Kafkaesque with your unique touch of ribald humor. Had a damn good time. Thanks for sharing :)

[Robin]

Glad you enjoyed Sid , thanks for stopping by .

[Nona]

wow! the carnivale of ideas, things, emotions, sensations, experiences...yet so cleverly and nicely framed to a thought-provoking piece!

"Life . . . is like a festival; just as some come to the festival to compete, some to ply their trade, but the best come as spectators, so in life the slavish men go hunting for fame or gain, the philosophers for truth." (Arendt 1989, 55)

[Robin]

Nice quote , thank you

[Aidz]

all hail the Crue n girls girls girls till it be also at the glory hole and the slide of the pole n drink the dreams of demon kisses of tongues that are forked

Nice

[Robin]

underneath the make-up and leather , they are like us - human , looking for fun , living while the living is good , most make it , a few don't , c'est la vie , as they wave their pretty little middle fingers to society , and it's double standards . thanks for socio-poetic comment

[jacob erin-cilberto]

my vision here is of "goupies"!

kind of goes through a stream of consciousness river of ribald tales of the chasers who will do anything to get close to the band.

liked the ride.

will probably save up for another ticket and ride it again.

jacob

[Robin]

that's the thing about stream of consciousness isn't it ? that place where words meet experiences - you have to live it , to write it . Thanks for sharing your thoughts .

[Sethnicity]

I love this.. I've never read a poem of yours quite like this! It's bold yet the plain typeface is a perfect touch. the broken random words of intent mirroring the models for which you are writing about. I love it!

[Robin]

Thank you , I call it Metaphoria , I have a few other pieces in this style , it is an unleashing . Joseph Campbell said "You have to be reckless when writing. Be as crazy as your conscience allows " If the words are there I let them run !

[Sethnicity]

Brilliant! That's sounds like harmony to my minds forest the wind the touches every leaf and every tree... Thanks again.

[RavenWells]

Interesting poem, kind of hard to follow at times though. Nice job :)

[Robin]

yeah , rants are like that

[Sethnicity]

Girls Are Like That! :D