Wild Girls

more metaphoria

"Quotation marks not needed" 

carnivale  carnal apples 

attract and distract  

tilt a whirlgirl in pearlescent swirls 

star spangled eyes to purple haze skies

of blue dream lying to the self made jam man  

bow , take another , smile if you have one 

real trill jacko  jilly swill the happy pill 

spot light cheer 

on cue ball to the side street beat of metal hook dragline fakirs

dump the trash talk sidewalk triomphe de arc  chalk up 

penance counting beads rug burn knee drop swap for the hip hop bus stop  

sticky seats and wolf whistle clean-up  

fondle the token bokon , chicken bone spoken 

nihongo  kanji , giesha  gooney tunes  lingham style  

rant pant  misdirectives

squirming sermonettes oak pew backdoor odor  

slip slide remote control loose change the channel scatter 

get a grip couch plastic or leather sin theism black lashes - fifty  

hot lime plasmonics  electronica 

devo revo shun the Sun hotseat panic  

more mores morality under the door sanity 

needily greedily fatcat chow

D cup notes bold shiny tip the waitress gold

pick one - pick two - you lose 

wonder blunder quest shun the expert 0 pinion shift 

shovel the interject , dissect the sect  

of proof spoof spooky reaction truth 

stop 

surge the urgent purge

honey money honey 

slambam trainwrecks , slo mo  shudder 

damn the people pick a side 

tequila wodka drunkcalls , s.o.b. stories and amen-nesia 

all hail !

wild girls  

copyright 2012 Robin Amaral 

Reviews

For me it was no Mary Poppins, not either: "Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious" but more a musical of: "Moulin Rouge" and all the hidden wildness under the dancing skirts....only the "fakirs' make it middle-asian-eastern, and bring me a fata-morgana effect, in a harem of love.... it all could be~
As our/and mostly your brain brings travles... :D

E.L.

[writing mojo]

those damn muses can make you even dribble and speak in tongued poems...L love this one great job!

[SamanthaMarie]

People should take vacations inside your head, I know I would. At least three times a year.

[Circe]

wow.... some of this trip made me laugh.... a fun, wild ride... and amen-nesia? that made me think of "immaneedya"... very smooth flow, very cool beat.

[Muse]

tilt a whirlgirl in pearlescent swirls

ha ha ha...too many favorite lines to quote them all. It was like watching Mary Poppins on Speed. Brilliant.

[Frieda P]

I think I got lost a few times, but it didn't matter this read is mind boggling and I devoured it. You know some pretty rambunctious lasses, all the more to enjoy the ride.

'tequila wodka drunkcalls , s.o.b. stories and amen-nesia '

That line is really delicious! Kudos.

[Phibby Venable]

I definitely loved this dash. Wonderful

[Robin]

Glad you had fun , Thank you

[Ed Hart]

may the saints forgive us

[Robin]

Time does a pretty good job

[asdarkeyesclose]

'penance counting beads rug burn knee drop swap for the hip hop
bus stop'

rhyme, ad hoc and so alive it is vibrant, imagery that is compelling and the combination of the two a veritable feast of idea, sound and vision. i really enjoyed this. fantastic.

[Robin]

That's why I call this metaphoria . and I like it ! it is euphoric writing in this style , a synaptic release of mental energy that splashes on paper as words . Always enjoy your thoughts , thank you .

[LA Lorena]

Wow! This is just so "out there",( which is a good thing). I love the way you can just go where you want, no fear to tread, and bring your readers along for the ride thru your imagination. Wonderfully vivid, and always with your sense of play and humour. I wonder if you poked at living things with sticks as a child to watch them move? ;)

[Robin]

Live, love, write, that's my motto . I observed everything ;)