Patience

Patience

A Poem by Robin
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Sometimes dear friend, as we talked about, the pure nothingness, and silence is the best lover all times.... even as I have a lover, I adore my private time.
And silcence to be stronger, rebuild, and be entrance.... :)
This was just pure poetry in short little meaningful layers.
Thank you.

E.L.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I know this feeling, have lived and breathed it. You have wonderfully and oh so poetically put this in verse.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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'I have stripped this skin

bare to the universe'

the universe, waiting as naked as her, how beautiful this poem is and how perfect your vision of life. fantastic.




Posted 11 Years Ago


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Patience is the virtue I have never had! oh! I am so excited about pleasant torturing myself with patience in timeless expectation for a 'touch'!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Brilliant! I am forever fascinated with the idea of the 'universe-mistress' tenderly palming and playing with your bare soul

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Short but very deeply felt words. Deeply emotional write..

Posted 11 Years Ago


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sometimes the anticipation is the best part

Posted 11 Years Ago


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An amazing declaration of soul Robin. May that touch be half as sweet as those words penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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:) but what a touch will that be, when it happens...

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Patience is a virtue; where Time himself must lay down seduced

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Added on December 25, 2012
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