A wonderful exploration of love, relationships, nature and the harmony between them all. I've always struggled when writing about these sorts of things and I admire how you've done it, the delicate yet vivid images...A true joy to read :) thank you and well done..
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Such key words - nature, and harmony . Thank you for reading Bertie
Your prose is so delicate, yet it packs quite an emotional punch...this was a truly beautiful piece on remembrance, perhaps of love lost? Extraordinary. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Wow, this is silk on the tongue. I'd take out the ellipses at the end and also in the second line, I'd change "your" to "a" or "the" I'm glad Steven recommended this to me.
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Mmmm , Silk is one of those words that pours across my spectrum of synesthesia . Ellipsis and your .. read moreMmmm , Silk is one of those words that pours across my spectrum of synesthesia . Ellipsis and your will stay . Thank you for reading .
Your ink has brought this to life, but only a knowing heart could recognize all this beauty as such. Love, love, ' mandala of her eyes', is there a more perfect phrase? Lovely.
Wow. I loved this. A seeing deeper into the moment. Wonder if it gets even a touch better by deleting "spun around us." Like using "as" to create a simile between music box and universe. Anyway, great write.
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I guess you had to be there , thank you for sharing your thoughts .
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Actually, no, I would just put it after "brilliant and huge." Good stuff!
btw, just listened to Babel--f*****g great! Of course, a French woman reciting it doesn't hurt.
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Thanks , actually she is Romanian , and a favorite poet . She is in my top ten of my friend list - L.. read moreThanks , actually she is Romanian , and a favorite poet . She is in my top ten of my friend list - Liliana Negoi . I highly recommend her , and the others , on my list .
'A sudden reminiscence', a precious and unexpected moment that stayed long enough to create a tribute to a deep and very special love. You belong out there, where life is more or less what it seems.. but isn't. Beautiful.
A beautiful piece, one of those that makes a spirit like mine ruminate on the natural beauty around us (be it human or weather-related). You connect the rational to the natural with the simple mention of mandala. This denotes how symmetry can be found in the smallest of corners. Thank you for this, Robin.
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Thank you for this insightful comment Kenneth , and the connection
This is marvelous Robin, I didn't expected anything else from a true seeer, and feeler of the universe. Neutral, perceiving, reflecting, gentle, and wise. A song to the heart, of those who need it. Always, a pleasure to be around you.
You have brought me a huge smile this day Lorena , Thank you ~
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I'm glad!
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I pour my Ink , through heart and soul , breath by breath , heartbeat by heartbeat . it is nice to h.. read moreI pour my Ink , through heart and soul , breath by breath , heartbeat by heartbeat . it is nice to have that felt .
This was exquisite, and if I could so elegantly describe that moment when I starting believing in fairy tales this is how it would be written, a perfect expression that plays on soul strings.
I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express .
Feel my words , look as deeply into yo.. more..