A wonderful exploration of love, relationships, nature and the harmony between them all. I've always struggled when writing about these sorts of things and I admire how you've done it, the delicate yet vivid images...A true joy to read :) thank you and well done..
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Such key words - nature, and harmony . Thank you for reading Bertie
you took this soaring through the heavens and the earth
I enjoyed your whole-hearted journey, your adventure into the worlds upon worlds existing in the heart
so very very well done
I'm always amused by your writings. A solemn jouney of beauty and tragedy. However; there's a certain amount of sadeness....the joy of your words shadowed, by yesterdays sorrow.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
The Art of life and living , I have been told I write pain beautifully ..
Thank you
so very beautiful, ''a daydream in your delicate palm....to the mirror of dark waters beckoning a rainbow from sullen clouds'' such fine lines herein... thank you.
Rosin makes the the glove hold tight to the bull rope,they have eight seconds together, Man and bull,about the time it takes to read this poem.Not very long,yet here it is still upright in my head a vision,like the lights and crowd's cheers,scoring the way we painted their night Well done Robin.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
such is the power of a moment , and thank you for the allegorical comment , I liked that .
I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express .
Feel my words , look as deeply into yo.. more..