Touch

Touch

A Poem by Robin
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sudden reminiscence

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and there you were 

a daydream in your delicate palm 

I watched your eyes race the sky

and heard your sigh

as you fell to your knees

to the mirror of dark waters  

beckoning a rainbow from sullen clouds


my Time machine

of crickets and songbirds 

the summer wind , and a million stars 

a music box  

as the universe spun around us 

brilliant and huge 

this unknowing , this adventure we called love 

between goddess and prince 

a violin and bow 

stillness
 
permeating silence

such are the secrets 

of touch , and the sky 

and the mandala 

of her eyes ...  






copyright 2012 Robin Amaral all rights reserved 

© 2012 Robin


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A wonderful exploration of love, relationships, nature and the harmony between them all. I've always struggled when writing about these sorts of things and I admire how you've done it, the delicate yet vivid images...A true joy to read :) thank you and well done..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

11 Years Ago

Such key words - nature, and harmony . Thank you for reading Bertie



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Robin, this is romantic, soul-touching poetry. I enjoyed this piece thouroughly and especially that ending. Magnificent!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

11 Years Ago

happy you felt my words , thank you Neva
you took this soaring through the heavens and the earth
I enjoyed your whole-hearted journey, your adventure into the worlds upon worlds existing in the heart
so very very well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

11 Years Ago

Thank you
I'm always amused by your writings. A solemn jouney of beauty and tragedy. However; there's a certain amount of sadeness....the joy of your words shadowed, by yesterdays sorrow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

11 Years Ago

The Art of life and living , I have been told I write pain beautifully ..
Thank you
Good one

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

11 Years Ago

Thanks
this is a really wonderful poem, I love romance poetry but i'm new at writing it, I looked around for a bit and you might be a new favorite now.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

11 Years Ago

Nice to hear , thank you
so very beautiful, ''a daydream in your delicate palm....to the mirror of dark waters beckoning a rainbow from sullen clouds'' such fine lines herein... thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Robin

11 Years Ago

I love a smile , Thank you
Some tasty lines Robin, spec like Sullen Clouds

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

11 Years Ago

Thank you , much appreciation
light and atmospheric! a poem that 'touches' ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Robin

11 Years Ago

I do intend to create atmospheres , happy you felt this one
Rosin makes the the glove hold tight to the bull rope,they have eight seconds together, Man and bull,about the time it takes to read this poem.Not very long,yet here it is still upright in my head a vision,like the lights and crowd's cheers,scoring the way we painted their night Well done Robin.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Robin

11 Years Ago

such is the power of a moment , and thank you for the allegorical comment , I liked that .
You write of a "touch" that is in touch with "a million stars"-- wow, that's cool:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Robin

11 Years Ago

to express and connect - Poetry

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