Haiku Moon

silent language

I missed the sounds of the forest

a lullaby

in the still of an autumn night 

where moonbeams danced through the pines

my heart reaching 

yours   

in the echoes of  

this Haiku




Copyright 2012 Robin Christopher Amaral

Reviews

[yelena]

how exquisite....*sigh*

[MOON]

Beautifully rendered , poignant write .

[Ruth]

Lamented and felt. This stirred my heart and senses, tangible oxo

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

this makes my heart ache with its very loveliness. Well done.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love the "echos of this Haiku"... this whispers a whimsical thought of yearning... Lovely write!

[FireWoman]

You display talented strokes through every genre. I adore the earthy and clean prose that reach into the soul.

[Audrey Howitt]

This brings me to a place of still wonder--lovely write Robin

[frivolous treasures]

Short, sweet, and absolutely beautiful in its imagery. Breathtaking. Very well done and conveyed, sir :)

[Jaweena...Eileen Quinta..]

Absolutely divine...
"where moonbeams danced through the pines
My heart reaching
yours
In the echoes of
This Haiku"

[Michael of Gilead]

"in the still of an autumn night
where moonbeams danced through the pines"

5 weeks ago i was in the garden of the gods, and this brought me back there....

Thank you.