Savor

live and love

have you ever caressed the curve of a bird of paradise  against the back drop of an indigo dream  felt the pulse of starlight  piercing in a kiss  from a lovers quiver  do you let the heart dance with the lace of passion and twist a moment into a silky braid  defiant under the ancient sky  shouting out her name   a Goddess  between the breath of shadow and moon  hear the stars laugh  as you savor the taste of eternity  and feel a smile  for you - you live you love  copyright 2012 Robin Christopher Amaral

Reviews

[Bertie]

There's such longing in this ! the images are so vivid I can almost taste them... there is also an ambiguity in the poem that I feel really lends itself as the emotions and images are also intangible and without definition.. I cannot exactly explain what I think it is about, or the images, or metaphors within it, but I have an immediate emotional response to it..It was a lovely poem to find and read tonight, so thank you and well done :) x

[SkinlessFrank]

like a golden sunset warming though the chill of a winter's day

[Robin]

such is the light , and poetry it inspires

[Emily B]

beautiful!!!

[Robin]

isn't it ?

[Emily B]

you have a way with words and things

[Robin]

it's a poet thing , you know