Savor

Savor

A Poem by Robin
"

live and love

"
have you ever caressed the curve of a bird of paradise 

against the back drop of an indigo dream 

felt the pulse of starlight 

piercing in a kiss 

from a lovers quiver 



do you let the heart dance with the lace of passion

and twist a moment into a silky braid 

defiant under the ancient sky 

shouting out her name  

a Goddess 

between the breath of shadow and moon 



hear the stars laugh 

as you savor the taste of eternity 

and feel a smile 

for you -

you live

you love 






copyright 2012 Robin Christopher Amaral 

© 2012 Robin


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There's such longing in this ! the images are so vivid I can almost taste them... there is also an ambiguity in the poem that I feel really lends itself as the emotions and images are also intangible and without definition.. I cannot exactly explain what I think it is about, or the images, or metaphors within it, but I have an immediate emotional response to it..It was a lovely poem to find and read tonight, so thank you and well done :) x


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A beautiful work of art :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Caught me up in an abstracted state, enjoying it all in. Right there Robin

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An unbelievable work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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NIZHONI.....Robin, loved this masterpiece! You are amazing how you capture the essence of life's wonderful moments in words. You inspire me...I have such a hard time penning my feelings down at times....maybe since English is my second language? I start thinking it out in Navajo hahaha.
I slept outside in my backyard with my 11 yr. old son last night and your poem certainly brings to mind the feelings of precious moments under the stars with my little man:
"hear the stars laugh
as you savor the taste of eternity
and feel a smile
for you -
you live
you love"
NIZHONI......beautiful. I am doing fantastic just busy with many projects!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Robin

12 Years Ago

So good to see you my friend , keep sharing your magic !
You felt it closer than close this time dear poet...
A write full of your gift ~

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Robin

12 Years Ago

You know the touch of the stars Elisa , thank you

12 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful poetry Robin ~ Always
I finally figured it out. The way you compose with words is like the way Maxfield Parrish paints.
That first stanza grabbed me, immersed me in the vision, the light, the moment. Well versed Robin.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Robin

12 Years Ago

Knowing this Artist , his style and his subtle influence upon the world of Art , I treasure this co.. read more
You have taken me a to place where surreal is tangible, and I truly savor the liquidity of your words...smooth and eloquently written, my friend. This is a gorgeous write!

"have you ever caressed the curve of a bird of paradise

against the back drop of an indigo dream

felt the pulse of starlight

piercing in a kiss

from a lovers quiver "~ I love this... Beautifully written.



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Robin

12 Years Ago

" where surreal is tangible " Thank you for feeling my words Robbie
'a Goddess

between the breath of shadow and moon'

this is heart warming and inspirational, some lovely images to delight the imagination, those special moments that are treasured. fantastic.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Robin

12 Years Ago

the moments that surround us when we take time to notice , thank you my friend
lovely!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Robin

12 Years Ago

love minimalists
reading your poems is like eating of Iounn's apples. passion falls into my hands in the form of multicolored feathers dripping of the hot equatorial sun.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A.A.Romanczuk

12 Years Ago

well then, you are an artist!
Robin

12 Years Ago

if the definition is one who expresses their self through life , I am
A.A.Romanczuk

12 Years Ago

you are :)

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