Savor

live and love

have you ever caressed the curve of a bird of paradise  against the back drop of an indigo dream  felt the pulse of starlight  piercing in a kiss  from a lovers quiver  do you let the heart dance with the lace of passion and twist a moment into a silky braid  defiant under the ancient sky  shouting out her name   a Goddess  between the breath of shadow and moon  hear the stars laugh  as you savor the taste of eternity  and feel a smile  for you - you live you love  copyright 2012 Robin Christopher Amaral

Reviews

[Bertie]

There's such longing in this ! the images are so vivid I can almost taste them... there is also an ambiguity in the poem that I feel really lends itself as the emotions and images are also intangible and without definition.. I cannot exactly explain what I think it is about, or the images, or metaphors within it, but I have an immediate emotional response to it..It was a lovely poem to find and read tonight, so thank you and well done :) x

[Little Whisper]

Ahhh... the beauty of love... you've captured it wonderfully! :)

[Michael of Gilead]

You never disappoint Robin

[Poetic Justice]

yes! YES! I feel that..

[Audrey Howitt]

This piece took me to a wonderful place Robin--sensory and full of a sense of awareness--you have such a way of transporting your reader--just beautifully done!

[Sami Khalil]

Nice poem. Well done.

[MOON]

This is absolutely beautiful a real song of the heart.

[FireWoman]

A sensory switch is flipped on when I read these passionate & flowing prose. Each time I feel that the coldness of the world has frozen off my ability to feel real emotion, you write something as stunning as this. Thank you for seeing love and life in everything around you, you are the hope that we may still have a chance at this upside down carpet ride.

[Robin]

Thank you for being you my Dove

[Persephone]

Beautiful....the imagery is breathtaking

[Robin]

Thank you

[Chris]

I came by to listen and found I wanted to stay even longer... that is what YOU do... thanks Robin.

[Robin]

Thank you for stopping by Chris

[Chris]

You have a way that so few can even touch... thank you for being here.