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You should have said you

loved me, in a militant

way.  Like hanging up the

sheets on lines in the sun

for the wind to

shake and

damned the neighbors.  You

should have loved me

wildly, home at five in

denim shorts, with art

and adventure, instead

of food.  You should have

loved me forcefully, an

echo in a seashell, intensely

poor, passionately rich,

you should have loved

me always.

Reviews

[. serah .]

-- magically earnest poetry... so unusual... so unique... and i think i want someone to say all of this to me... i find expression for my own emotions in your words...