Romance Gone (Haiku)

A Poem by Roseanne W.

Tears in red petals,
the rose dies, fades into grey,
their love wilts away.

© 2011 Roseanne W.

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Clockwork

I like how the poem starts with the image of the rose fading, and then progresses through its demise. That was a perfect way to lead into the final line which describes the passion of two lovers withering. This is a very nicely constructed little piece, and I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Clockwork

Posted 13 Years Ago

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The Cougar's Den

Sweetly done, I clap
Bowing before you, hats off
Your smile prize enough.

GREAT JOB!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on February 26, 2011
Last Updated on February 26, 2011

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Roseanne W.

NY

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23 year old still trying to figure everything out. . . I am the mother of a 1 1/2 year old, she is the center of my universe, and eventually when all the anger is out, i hope to be able to write abou.. more..