Vampyric love

You have me on my knees....
I am your servant....
I beg of you tell me What to do....
Tell me where to go....

Your are like the sun
you can walk into the any dark room and make it
Bright as day

Oh How i love you so....
with everything i have
Until my last breath of life

I dedicate my life to making you the happiest
Girl on the face of this earth
I dedicate myself to serving you my love

Oh  how much i love you....
True love at first sight....
The first time i saw you i felt love
but i told myself i would never be able to have you
oh how i was wrong

Now that i have you....
everyday is paradise when im with you....
but when im not with you i feel so lonely....
How i long to hear your sweet voice.....
how i long to touch your beautiful skin....

Your Beautiful black flowing hair....
Your Eyes Twinkle like Topaz....
I love you so much....
No Sunrise or sunset can compare to your beauty
the Stars in the night sky have no match against you my love

My Life Has changed and im enjoying every second of it
You have changed my life
You Bring out the best in me...
But when your not around it brings out the worst in me

Baby you have tamed the beast that roams inside of me
the beast that was known to wreck havoc....
This Vampyric love that we share is oh so pure and true

Time will pass by...
But My love for you will always be true
Baby i love you so much....
I cannot Express to you how much i love you
Its just one of those things that can not be measured
to Measure it.....would be impossible

You have taken all my Troubles away
You have taken all my worries away
I trust you with my past
I Trust you with my Present
I trust you with my Future
and I Trust you with My Life
 

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Wow, a poem about true submission... as a submissive I know what you mean by this... Oh how love can turn someone into a submissive person. You are like me with your writing, you're in love with the "..." one thing with that is that it gets very repetitive, if you want to have a pause try adding a comma or maybe a "--" or something. This is a good poem that speaks of a love that not many people have experienced. I know that i haven't. This was a good piece. Great Job!