Vampyric Tendencies

As i look up to the sky
it turns red
and the blood drips from my mouth

my hands grip the blade as i drag it
down your chest
i look up at you and look at the pathetic
little look that you always have
i just smile as rip your chest open and grab
your beating heart

no
you cant scream
cause i already cut your throat
what was that you say
your sorry?
its too late for you

i taste the blood dripping off the knife
Tastes delicious
the hunger rises within me
the vampyric side of me screams for more

i tear into your flesh with my teeth
the hunger is never satisfied
all i want is more
more
more
and more
no reason to stop
more reason to keep going

As i see the sun creep up over the mountain
i disapear into the shadows
leaving your corpse behind
with no trace of me left behind

Reviews

[Flow]

Vampme Contest: At first the knife threw me, however I love this one. Watching the feeding and the helpless victim can't even scream as the vamp removes their heart. How lovely is that? Very good writing I felt the suspense, I could see the victims death coming and the action in it was nice. Bravo~