Words

Words

A Poem by Brittany Zedalis
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Bullying, essentially.

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Words

Words creeping into the

Back of my mind

Into my soul

Words tearing at my heart

Words slithering in between

Truth and lies

Words pounding

In my brain

Breaking down walls

I didn't even know

Were there

Words

Powerful things

Words can heal

Even the most

Fragile of people

Or shatter what's left

Of their being

Words

Words are weapons



~Dead Snakes 2013~

© 2017 Brittany Zedalis


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I always feel like this is how I feel when I need to write. It's like words just keep pounding at you until you get your feelings down on to paper. It's only then that I may find peace.

Love this poem! I could really relate to it. It's true that words can be tools and weapons.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

7 Years Ago

I wrote this back when someone was constantly bullying me and I needed to get my feelings out. Thank.. read more



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A great write Brittany ... very thought provoking!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
In my brain
Breaking down walls
I didn't even know!!!

wonderful work... really good !

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! :]
true indeed, words are the most powerful weapon on earth, people hardly realise that, if they did they would be more careful with their choice of words, well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

They really are. Thank you!

Very well penned!
Words and how they are used.
How they can be powerful and damaging.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Words are weapons.

Have truer words been said? I took away quite a bit from this. Brilliant job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Words can heal
Even the most
Fragile of people
Or shatter what's left
Of their being
Words
Words are weapons

Our words and our thoughts hold far more power than we realize, so true. Profound write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
I like your non-rhyming style...great song. Bullies need to be quartered and fed their own medicine. Good rant of a read Brittany.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

Thank you! Rhyming used to be the only thing I ever wrote, but after this one poured out of me, I re.. read more
So honest. I love it, great write. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Simple, well written and easy to read, well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

Thank you, thank you!
So very true. If more people only realized that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

Indeed! Thank you for reading!

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Added on February 23, 2014
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