A Moment of Nothing

A Moment of Nothing

A Poem by Ren
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Unfinished

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It's the steam of tranquility
This non-mirage eating at my psyche
A way to relax, a jester's dream
The panicking rise of the sum beam
The day's endless time wraps my neck.

© 2011 Ren


Author's Note

Ren
It's something I started and didn't finish. Not sure where I was going with it, but it's always nice to keep these things on file somewhere.

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Its nice to forget sometimes.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes that precious moment of blankness is as serene as a dreamless night.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is awesome!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree i have many on file unfinished i think it helps us grow and remember where we have been

Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 2, 2011
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