We Are

We Are

A Poem by Raynie12
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If you go fast, it kind of sounds like a rap. Makes it more fun.

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We are part of a display
Broken and wonderful
Shaken and scribbled on
Painted with a joyful glee
Sketched it all to be
A beautiful masterpiece
There are not words to describe us
For we are all too colorful
Dark and morbid
Drawn like a kite
You can't even see us at night
We are abstract
Meant to distract

© 2018 Raynie12


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there shouldn't be an "it" in Line 5, but other than that: holy kwap!! Way to go! This is amazing. Much enjoyed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a very nice well written write. I like the emotions

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raynie12

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Raynie12
Raynie12

Cassville, MO



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