In the Mind of

In the Mind of

A Poem by Raynie12
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This could be about multiple different types of disorders. In my case, I wrote it from the view of depression.

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Takes my sleep,
Makes me weak.
Shields my eyes and
Muffles my cries,
As it feeds me lies.
Keeps me from reprise.
Never ceases
To be a surprise.
Coming at terrible times.
Locking me up
(Oh, my foul luck).
Taking the keys,
Leaving me to weep.
Nightmarish slumber,
Booming thunder.
All just sucking me
Even deeper under.

© 2018 Raynie12


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I really enjoyed this poem with its meaning that youve place into it. I realyy relate to it and find it very lovely. Keep it up

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Raynie12
Raynie12

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