Don't cry

Don't cry

A Poem by Rayne Murray

They tell me i'll never understand
The pain they feel
It's in my hand now
to help them heal

They say my life has gone so well
But they don't know
inside my pain swells
And I'm ready to explode

i'm ready to explode
don't cry
please don't
I'll sing another lullaby if you'll only stop

Sometimes I wonder
how they get these ideas
that my life has no blunder
that my life has no fears

You think i'm sane but then
how do the thoughts that fill my head
make a million men
wish they were dead?

They never give themselves
time to heal
they heads full of broken promises
adding to their feel

I'm read to explode
don't cry 
please don't
I'll sing another lullaby if you only won't

A sweet lullaby
to help you heal
give time
it'll change the way that you feel

It'll change the way you feel

© 2012 Rayne Murray


Author's Note

Rayne Murray
ignore grammar problems

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I liked it. Its seems as if something I would write about since I'm mostly sad all the time to.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's sad but not fragile...fierce even. Amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amazing i loved how touching that was. almost cried.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don't Cry; a poem by Angelica Murray.

My review for this is, sometimes the things that hurt us the must makes us happier than things that don't. We learn we can over come it, and it broadens our feedback.

Your words are simple, yet, I found the complexity in them.

I give you an 8 out of 10.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rayne Murray
Rayne Murray

Merritt Island, FL



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