Lie To Me

Tell me you love me.

That you'll never leave me.

Lie to me.

 

Make me want you.

Make me believe that you want me too.

Lie to me.

 

Let me believe that you'll always be there.

That you'll always love me.

Lie to me.

 

Pretend that I'm your only one.

The one who holds your heart.

Lie to me.

 

Wipe my tears away when I cry.

Saying you hate to see me upset.

Lie to me.

 

Promise me forever.

Then rip it all away.

Finally truth.

 

Enjoy my tears.

And prey on my fears.

Finally truth.

 

Hurt me like no one ever has.

Leaving me broken and sad.

Finally truth.

 

How could I get the lies confused with the truth?

How could I be so blind by love for you?

Reviews

[Simon]

I believe this is a nice poem!

[tedefroberts]

Well thought out and well constructed!

[Chris]

I wonder if you have come out the other end of this tunnel yet?

[Dinesh Kumar]

Great
Nicely penned
Really sad

[kate_m]

I've rarely seen such an accurate and vivid depiction of so many failed relationships, and never in so few and pointed words. This is great work.

[wordsofheart]

That is an amazing piece of poetry. So deep and strong. Every verse is well-written. Great Work!

[Lyn Anderson]

Very powerful. Simple. To the point. I love it. Skilled craftsmanship with the word.

[prachi prangya agasti]

liked this.. nicely written...

[H.M. Hearing]

I like this a lot. It has a soothing darkness that I find comforting. The things you can see when the world turns to twilight (not the book). Keep writing.

[Sevendayspast]

I don't need to read these things when i'm already in a down mood lol
Anywho I love any writing that I can feel the writers emotions poured into the page
Keep up the good work!
-Chuck