SCOPE

SCOPE

A Poem by Raymond Federle
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A feeling

"

It's all grey the world pouring in,

intrusive and absurd, abusive and hurt

but I shut it out, by shouting out

so loud that you can hear me out

I cant hear what it is im screaming about

Words or sounds that contain my feelings

and what it is I'm feeling

in my brain, remains what's left of me

but I can make no sense of what I see

So I just quietly sit and think.

© 2016 Raymond Federle


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I have learnt at this point ... thinking is the worst thing for me. I go to sleep. Sounds like you are observing the feeling ... that works too. Best to pursue a policy where you think your thoughts and they not you. If that makes sense ... good to see around these part, Rayed. The write was powerful for me:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raymond Federle

8 Years Ago

Thank YOU Pryde, for stopping by and the review. Yeah, I'm not on here much any more at all except t.. read more



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I like the fact that you used the color gray instead of black, it makes you think more

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"in my brain, remains what's left of me

but I can make no sense of what I see

So I just quietly sit and think."

You describe the scope real well. Thank you for sharing...:)............

Posted 7 Years Ago


The world most certainly seems like grey is pouring in. i really enjoyed the way you put that. great job

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raymond Federle

7 Years Ago

Thx for the comment. I don't really come here very much any more except to use it as online storage... read more
Haven't seen you in a long while. This poem is very raw, very real. Sometimes the worst place to be is inside one's own head.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raymond Federle

8 Years Ago

thx KL been soooo busy other places just using >here< so storage
I have learnt at this point ... thinking is the worst thing for me. I go to sleep. Sounds like you are observing the feeling ... that works too. Best to pursue a policy where you think your thoughts and they not you. If that makes sense ... good to see around these part, Rayed. The write was powerful for me:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raymond Federle

8 Years Ago

Thank YOU Pryde, for stopping by and the review. Yeah, I'm not on here much any more at all except t.. read more

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Added on May 21, 2016
Last Updated on May 24, 2016
Tags: home, depression, feeling, sad

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Raymond Federle
Raymond Federle

Cumberland, MD



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I've always been a jack of all trades. I've been a poet, author, social commentator, comedian, online gamer, pod cast host, and Youtuber. I've had a class A license to drive semi truck over the road. .. more..

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