My new THANG

My new THANG

A Poem by Raymond Federle

my new thang

sweet sweet girl

loves the sound

when I rock her world




© 2014 Raymond Federle


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Raymond Federle

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There's nothing like the sound of a tractor to make a woman's heart beat faster.

That guitar is just about big enough, isn't it?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Raymond Federle

10 Years Ago

LOL Yeah Marie it is...now in all honesty we TRIED to find a smaller guitar...but sometimes, ya know.. read more
Sweet and simple generally gets the girl...
Nice little write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very very nice. I Love it.
Excellent job!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raymond Federle

10 Years Ago

Thank ya dear!- ZERO
Tina Kline

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome.

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Added on August 23, 2014
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Raymond Federle
Raymond Federle

Cumberland, MD



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I've always been a jack of all trades. I've been a poet, author, social commentator, comedian, online gamer, pod cast host, and Youtuber. I've had a class A license to drive semi truck over the road. .. more..

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