When Evil Finds Me

When Evil Finds Me

A Poem by Raymond Federle
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When Evil Finds Me

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When evil finds me, I'll hold it close, to keep your gods at bay.
In this cloak of flesh and blood I hide from light of day.


When evil finds me, I will become what monsters dare to dream.
Time to reap fresh love of hell such as never seen.


When evil finds me, I'll look up, for signs of my appeal.

I'd claw each step to marble gates to make a final deal.


When evil finds me, I will burn for all the things I've done.

No more to weep for pities sake the Father, Ghost and Son.

© 2016 Raymond Federle


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Just think of evil as the far left or far right settings on a thermostat, both fire and ice may kill though both may give a momentary thrill. In the main, just be sane. A faulty thermostat among all its members (survival traits) leads to a species’ extinction.

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Raymond Federle

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!



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Just think of evil as the far left or far right settings on a thermostat, both fire and ice may kill though both may give a momentary thrill. In the main, just be sane. A faulty thermostat among all its members (survival traits) leads to a species’ extinction.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raymond Federle

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!
Greatly dark, and poignant Ray, you are one of the few, who truly can connect to the darkness.
I admire your skills... for it's hard, to write what you feel for many, but you do it marvelously.

- Elisa

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raymond Federle

10 Years Ago

Thank you Elisa! :)

10 Years Ago

My pleasure always! :))
That was slightly creepy Ray .I really liked the flow and rhytmn .Say what I like creepy lol

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Raymond Federle
Raymond Federle

Cumberland, MD



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I've always been a jack of all trades. I've been a poet, author, social commentator, comedian, online gamer, pod cast host, and Youtuber. I've had a class A license to drive semi truck over the road. .. more..

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