My Sweets

My Sweets

A Poem by Raymond Federle
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My Sweets

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MY SWEETS


Unexpected but welcome.

My heart is lightened. 

Faces expressing,

the love and joy contained herein. 

© 2014 Raymond Federle


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Nice and simple always does it. Lovely thoughts, Raymond! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awh gave me goosebumps, is that really your daughter? So sweet Raymond!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Raymond Federle

10 Years Ago

Yep that's her. 4 years old. She'll be 5 in July. Got 3 boys as well...check out my pic tab on my p.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

So adorable! Wow, big family, I always wanted a daughter, I have three boys also. I'm always afraid.. read more
Such a simply worded expression love and joy! Kudos! The pic is wonderful too.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sweet :) I love the first line! Well said!

Posted 10 Years Ago


God bless her and your words describes love and joy

Posted 10 Years Ago


For my daughter, Alara Jade. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


A clever, sweet and ultimately easy read, well done, good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on February 23, 2014
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Raymond Federle
Raymond Federle

Cumberland, MD



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I've always been a jack of all trades. I've been a poet, author, social commentator, comedian, online gamer, pod cast host, and Youtuber. I've had a class A license to drive semi truck over the road. .. more..

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