My Sweets

My Sweets

A Poem by Raymond Federle
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My Sweets

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MY SWEETS


Unexpected but welcome.

My heart is lightened. 

Faces expressing,

the love and joy contained herein. 

© 2014 Raymond Federle


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Awwww. How old is your daughter?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Raymond Federle

10 Years Ago

5 yrs old..... :)
There is no other joy like it. She is all the beauty that life contains. A lovely and touching tribute.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

She is adorable, and your poem is as sweet as her face. God bless!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a cutie, what a tribute!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heartwarming piece dear friend. Your daughter is so cute, little angel.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am a parent and I understand the sentiment and beauty of this piece so well. Like this poem, she is a beauty.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short and sweet but with that little face how could it not be, nice one raymond.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple and surprisingly sweet. Maybe it makes it even sweeter when some of us dark hearts come up for air.:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful poem for a beautiful child. Good one sir

Posted 10 Years Ago


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She is SO adorable. I love kids. That's why I'm going to be an elementary teacher, haha. This piece is very sweet. :]

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 23, 2014
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Raymond Federle
Raymond Federle

Cumberland, MD



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I've always been a jack of all trades. I've been a poet, author, social commentator, comedian, online gamer, pod cast host, and Youtuber. I've had a class A license to drive semi truck over the road. .. more..

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