Dirty Old Man

I go to parks to take very long walks

and feed the birds at my feet.

I take mental pictures of physical dishes,

I can hope to never achieve.

From under my hat, I watch like a cat, it's just all part of the plan...

A succulent thing,

              and the joy that it brings,         

to this dirty old man.

Author's Note

Reviews

[MsJewel]

Your creativity and sense of humor shines in this little gem. Somehow I never pictured you as a dirty old man..... Regardless, you have left me with a smile this evening. Thank you.

:) Julie

[R. L. Hill]

Lawl....This is great. I would have NEVER attempted to look at such a simple thing through the eyes of the old man. This is a perspective that brought me into a new existence for however brief a moment. Really quite brilliant. And funny too! And a little pervy....It's so your style, Ray. Enjoyed this alot.

[Frieda P]

I'm not sure if I should slap you or laugh....ha.

[Baby Ricochet]

Hey Aqualung....................................................

[A. Amos]

Love the twist at the end, simply smart write i enjoyed..

[Jack...]

I have one of those hats Raymond. I really enjoyed this one.

[Michael Stevens]

Feel like I need a raincoat just to read this; excellent!

[Lyn Anderson]

Ha ha ha I love this ... and on that note, I think I am inspired to write about something ...

[Vampaslick]

Very odd but for some reason I had to read it again. Good work

[Vidya Bacchus]

Really a dirty old man lol