Flakes

Flakes

In random miracles,

falling to their destiny.

Soft and light,

summer's forgotten tears.

Pausing on the wind,

moments fleeting,

as they continue their intrepid plunge,

from the clouds to the wanting earth below.

Cautiously lingering,

in the cascade of the languid winter sun,

before floating down the delicate,

worn paths formed in the air by their predecessors.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

This was a wonderful way to write about snow. It's beautiful. And I couldn't stop laughing at that gif. xD

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

I LOVE THE SNOW!!! (': I like how this is structured maybe would be better if it were a little longer but great either way!

[Raymond Federle]

Thank you Jenny! ;)

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Y'welcome :)

[Shaquana Adams]

This is a very cute snow poem. The cat gif made me laugh. Nice job! :)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A great poem. Snow rules, at least in my opinion. I loved how peacefully you described the snowflakes yet added a sense of thrill to it. Bravo!