An introspective thought on a fleeting moment of time.

An introspective thought on a fleeting moment of time.

A Poem by Raymond Federle
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An introspective thought on a fleeting moment of time.

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It begins.
A feeling deep within.

It builds.
Anticipation mounts.


The purge.
Continuous flow.


The end.
Sweet release.


I BROKE WIND
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© 2014 Raymond Federle


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Raymond Federle

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This is me having a go at myself.....

Posted 9 Years Ago


It fit my mood. Kinda needed to read something like this. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


hahahaha, I loved this. it was silly. I love it when people can make me laugh. xo Winter

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is funny and I can see your funny side, Ray. Cool music, too.
Nice!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ha-ha this is incredibly funny. I was expecting something deep, philosophical and thought provoking. The creativity in this short poem is great. Poetry does not have to be serious. Thank you for posting this poem Raymond Federle.
-sonnetmoon

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raymond Federle

10 Years Ago

Long time no see. Wad up wit dat!?!? LOL Welcome back and thanks!
sonnetmoon

10 Years Ago

Yes I am glad to be back. I am currently suffering from writers block ha-ha. Thank you for posting t.. read more
LAWL. NOT what I was expecting for this ending. WOW. This is freaking hilarious. I thought you going to get all deep and passionate and then bam...you fart.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Raymond Federle

10 Years Ago

I think I fooled everyone on this one... if I'm not being amazing and awe inspiring then I'm doing s.. read more
R. L. Hill

10 Years Ago

I think it is brilliant. We shouldn't be so used to a common form that the uncommon shocks us. Prove.. read more
LMAO! So, wait. This is a poem about farting? LOL! Gotta love it! This wasn't something I was expecting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Well, I thought this was gonna be a very thought provoking philosophical poem at first. Then it turns out to be just a thought on passing lol! Very funny Raymond!

Posted 10 Years Ago


:D This is amazing! So unexpected. Marvelous and absolutely hilarious!

Posted 10 Years Ago


LOL! I never suspected that ending! Cute and clever Raymond!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raymond Federle

10 Years Ago

Thanks Jules :)

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Raymond Federle
Raymond Federle

Cumberland, MD



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I've always been a jack of all trades. I've been a poet, author, social commentator, comedian, online gamer, pod cast host, and Youtuber. I've had a class A license to drive semi truck over the road. .. more..

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