Sullivan can count. (written as told to me by Sullivan.)

Sullivan can count. (written as told to me by Sullivan.)

A Chapter by Raymond Federle
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"The hardest thing about counting is all the numbers."- Sullivan

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I can count all the way to potato.

I know what the color blue tastes like.

I definitely did see a puddy tat and I can spell sumatopoppih backwards,

it spells hippopotamus.


Summertime smells like paste and band aid brand band aids.

Grandpa can only carry a tune in his bucket but it's got a hole in it.

I'm glad Grandma is married to Grandpa 'cause it'd be weird if she was married to some other guy.

And I'm happy that my name is Sullivan 'cause that's what everyone calls me.



© 2014 Raymond Federle


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Raymond Federle

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My favourite of the first three, this is clever and funny and just an enjoyable read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this! I'm not sure why I haven't read your Sullivan poems till now. I feel like I've missed out till this moment. You capture a lot of things in your writing, Raymond, but there is a reality and a love and depth to these about Sullivan that I thoroughly enjoy.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


This brought a big smile to my face, very Spike Milligan!
(one little typo: Gradnpa -> Grandpa, and perhaps you mean 'it'd be /it would be weird?) :)

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raymond Federle

10 Years Ago

Thanks, it made me smile to. Yep, those were typos. Thanks again for finding them. I tend to write e.. read more

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Raymond Federle
Raymond Federle

Cumberland, MD



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I've always been a jack of all trades. I've been a poet, author, social commentator, comedian, online gamer, pod cast host, and Youtuber. I've had a class A license to drive semi truck over the road. .. more..

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