A Different Kind of Prision

A Different Kind of Prision

A Poem by Soul Fire

My body is a prision,
There is no way out.

No where to go,
No way to shout.

No one will hear you.
But you waste your breathe.

You yell,you scream,you shout.
''LET ME OUT!! LET ME OUT!!''

But the prision your in is unlike any other,
Your body is your prision,
Your sentence is life.
There is no way out.
But the knife.

But you dare not draw that out.
So there you are behind the cell bars,
Trying to call out.

But no one will hear you,
There is no way out.

© 2013 Soul Fire


Author's Note

 Soul Fire
This poem is about 'feeling trapped' inside your own body. This poem was inspired by my experience with scoliosis and being ''stuck' or ''trapped'' within the painful and uncomfortable body of a person with scoliosis and the emotional and mental effects that go along with it.

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Very well written. I could feel the passion behind the words. It flowed quite nicely. Great job!!:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! |:D
Amazing poem! I loved it, it flowed wonderfully and I love the meaning behind it (: But after all I love all your poems xD

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :D
The Fallen

11 Years Ago

Your welcome :D
don't worry your superman (boyfriend) will come and save you or to keep you company but i love the poem tho 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


 Soul Fire

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

11 Years Ago

no problem

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 Soul Fire
Soul Fire

Little Dreams, Dreamland, Canada



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