She's Beautiful

She's Beautiful

A Poem by Soul Fire
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A Tribute to a friend of mine

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Such a beautiful girl in such a messed up world
I just hope she knows she beautiful.

Such a beautiful thing,
Why do you feel next to nothing?

Her scars cut deeper than words can describe,
I just hope I can clean them, and make her happy.
‘Cause every one deserves to be happy, especially her.

She’s so beautiful I just hope she knows.
I love her for her, and just the way she is.

What a beautiful spirit locked away inside,
 So used to the abuse,
And the need to hide.

What a lovely person within her,
I just hope I have the key.

Don’t worry little star,
Don’t mind me.

What a beautiful girl lies inside you,
There is no need to hide.

You are beautiful.

Don’t worry,
I’m here.

I’m not leaving, 
I’m staying here.

And when you do not believe the words I speak.

I will prove you wrong.


‘Because Little star,
You are beautiful just the way you are.


‘such a beautiful girl in such a messed up world.
I just hope she knows she’s beautiful. 

© 2012 Soul Fire


Author's Note

 Soul Fire
Always looking for reviews and advice. (: Anything you like or would suggest to change? I'm thinking about making it into a song. Editing advice appreciated! Please review (: Hope you enjoyed

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very good, i love it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you (:
Victoria Elizabeth

12 Years Ago

your welcome!!!
I love it. :) It's sweet. What kind of song would it be? Country, lullaby.. rap..?? lolz

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you, and I don't know yet (:

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 Soul Fire
Soul Fire

Little Dreams, Dreamland, Canada



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A Poem by Soul Fire