I heart you, you haunt me

I heart you, you haunt me

A Poem by Soul Fire

I heart you,
You haunt me.

Let’s go out to the cemetery.


With a G
        R
           E
              A
               T

   B
  I
G

Bug.



And a 

   N
O     E
O    S

For you and me.


I haunt you, why wouldn’t you want to haunt with me too?

© 2012 Soul Fire


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I enjoyed looking at the format for this poem. How you placed the letters made your beautiful writing that more intriguing.

I congratulate you on your hard work. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you so very much! :D
very clever....i did this once with falling leaves for effect on a piece about autumn
never thought of a noose...brilliant!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
quinfinn

12 Years Ago

yowsah
Wow I love the style of this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

thank you :)
I like it, it's very creative the way you wrote this ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you (:

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 Soul Fire
Soul Fire

Little Dreams, Dreamland, Canada



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