The Box

The Box

A Poem by Soul Fire

Wedding rings in a beautiful box,
The love that once there is now lost.
Growing up with wedding rings,
And then one day they disappeared.
Daddy remarried to a 6 pack of beers,
What happened to the love I once knew,
But most of all Daddy, What happened to you?

© 2012 Soul Fire


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sad thing when loved ones choose substances over their cherished ones, it can get too much to bear life and that is the road they choose.......nice write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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:O OH!! A TWIST IN STORY!!!!...poem :) Awesome peom! I loved it! :D Yeah.

My expressions while reading this:
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:o aw!
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>:O OOOOOOH!!!!!!
>:D HECK YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAHH!!!!! ^-^ AWESOME JOB! ^-^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much, glad you liked this (:
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12 Years Ago

WELCOME ^-^

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Added on September 22, 2012
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 Soul Fire
Soul Fire

Little Dreams, Dreamland, Canada



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Hello, I'm Raya. I love music,writing and singing.I'm always writing or creating something.I really enjoy singing and writing my own music.I write stories,poems and books.I have a large variety of.. more..

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A Poem by Soul Fire