Tonight

Tonight

A Poem by Soul Fire

Trying to breathe but my chest is so tight.
Trying to hold on, but I’m not alright.
I’m trying to cry, but I am out of sight.
No one will see me tonight

© 2012 Soul Fire


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that's sure anxiety and an eager attempt to hold on, as said. Great write! ---mishel

Posted 12 Years Ago


That was pretty cool. Nice job. Relatable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thanks

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Added on September 18, 2012
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 Soul Fire
Soul Fire

Little Dreams, Dreamland, Canada



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Hello, I'm Raya. I love music,writing and singing.I'm always writing or creating something.I really enjoy singing and writing my own music.I write stories,poems and books.I have a large variety of.. more..

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A Poem by Soul Fire