I'm Loving  Loving you.

I'm Loving Loving you.

A Poem by Soul Fire

I got the worse news I could ever hear.
I could barely bare it...

I texted you,
eyes filling with tears.

A phone call came my way,
I told you everything.
You said ''Babe,I don't know what to say..I really wish I did .but everything's going to be okay.''

You listened to me,
and when it was time to say ''goodbye.''
You said that you would always be there,
and that you'd be on your way!

You then surprised me,
There was you,
Waiting at the gate.

I ran to you,and gave you a huge huge.

''You came!'' I yelled.

''Well,I couldn't be late,to see the most beautiful girl in the world.''
I smiled,
I knew I only had a short while,exactly an hour,but I swear that hour lasted forever.

We went to the store,
You bought me some ice cream.

I still couldn't believe this was happening,
I was convinced it was a dream.

When I told you this,
You came in closer and kissed me and asked me if it was real.

I nodded my head.

Couldn't believe this was happening,
and when I thanked you.
You said it was no big deal.

You held me close,and wiped away my tears,
Destroyed my doubts,murdered my fears.

And when you had to go,
You kissed me so gently.
And said ''I never want to let you go.''

© 2012 Soul Fire


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aaaawwww i really love it


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Andrew! Glad you liked it! :D
So romantic poetic tale this is...love it !!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SoulCrusader (Yas)

12 Years Ago

so I won't disturb you guys now :p
 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

He loved it
SoulCrusader (Yas)

12 Years Ago

hehe awesome :)

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 Soul Fire
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