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A Poem by Soul Fire
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A poem about being completely and fully loved and accepted by someone.

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I am transparent to you,
You can see me right through.

I am completely crystal clear to you.

You know me better than anyone.
To others I am cloudy,dark and opaque.

But since I met you,I am completely shown through,
My walls bow down before you.
You've knocked down my fortress,
Punched out my guards.

You know me for me,
Love me for who I am.
Accept me.

When I am with you,I cannot pretend who I am.

You are truly,My best friend.

© 2012 Soul Fire


Author's Note

 Soul Fire
Doesn't really rhyme,but enjoy!

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It has a very nice sentiment. It gives a good insight to who you are.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

Thank you :D

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 Soul Fire
Soul Fire

Little Dreams, Dreamland, Canada



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